Animal Town

This week we have used another picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story.

What I like about my writing is that the picture helps me to write my story.

I need to improve on writing more and checking my spelling.

Here is my writing about Animal Town.

It feels so good to be in Animal Town.

I could be a lion in Animal  Town. I would look

like a lion with hair around my head.

I have orange and black skin.

I could be the king of Animal Town I will have guards.
my guards would be the bear, koala ,giraffe and zebra. I trained them.

to be my guards to fight for me. I will have a statue of me roaring.
The people would have a good life.